- There was no fresh cream to cool down her first sip of thick bitter coffee on that hot morning.
- Miller burnt her tongue.
- There was no fresh cream to cool down her first sip of thick bitter coffee on that sultry morning, the same morning Miller had her last cup of coffee.
- On that sultry morning, there was no fresh cream to cool down Miller’s last cup of thick bitter coffee.
Thursday, September 2, 2010
“Write four possible first lines. You are not carving them in stone; you can go back and change them at any time. The sentence can even just be fragments.” Jennifer Traig, Part II The Autobiographer's Handbook
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